a palm strand yellowing, untwisted cattail lines

9thSep. × ’09
a palm strand
    yellowing, untwisted
        cattail lines

3 Things About This Haiku

  1. All palm leaves in my imagination have one wilting tip.
  2. “Untwisted” seems like a very twisted kind of word because it’s un-something-ed.
  3. Written while drugged on coffee and sleep-deprivation.
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