string weathered silver tone clattered cylinders

22ndSep. × ’09
By Melony Dott
string weathered
silver tone clattered
    cylinders

3 Things About This Haiku

  1. These lines represent a wind chime.
  2. The words strike each other to create an impression of the object.
  3. That is my hope, at least.
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