indistinct shushing, leaves scatter boughs bending

14thOct. × ’09
indistinct
    shushing, leaves scatter
boughs bending

Three Things About This Haiku

  1. I think of lying in the hammock. Hammock haiku.
  2. Indistinct doesn’t seem like a word one finds in a haiku. It’s an experiment.
  3. This one reads better on one line.
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